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Fireflies all dance like stars
They don't seem very far
One hundred galaxies away
You look down but up at me
Are you happy with what you see?
My own eternity

We all follow followers
Because there is no one there to lead
We all think we know everything
But we don't know what we really need

In the end the end begins
What it means is lost within
If we all knew the way
We would not have much to say

If I was blind and could not see
Would you follow me
If I was deaf and could hear
Would you dance with me
If I was lost, didn't know the way
Would you join me
In my eternity

Round and round the world goes round
Looking for what it has not found

We all follow followers
Danceing in a circle

Round and round I go round
Looking for what I have not found
You look down but up at me
Are you happy with what you see?
My own eternity
If I was lost, did not know the way
Would you join me
In my own eternity?
©2008-2009 ~Xio101
:iconxio101:

Author's Comments

This just kinda came to me the other day. I was writeing LOX and then... I was writeing this. XP

Please tell me what you think.
(I'm thinking this is one of those pomes that sound way better in my head then it does in real life XP )

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:iconmanisa57:
Wow. I really liked it. :)
:iconxio101:
Thank you very much. :)

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"*SIGH* Stupid boobs" ~Nagi-Tsukiono
"AND REMEMBER! Man love is the best love!"
"I want a YODA SODA!"
"Have you ever tried to shoot a pop-tart out your nose?"-Spacegirl
".... Stupid babies" RVB -tucker
"LOVE ME damn it!" -Twilightwolf
:iconspacegirl:
That's really good :)
I'd probably submit it as a song though :)

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"Power without knowledge is useless."
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:iconxio101:
thanks

--
"*SIGH* Stupid boobs" ~Nagi-Tsukiono
"AND REMEMBER! Man love is the best love!"
"I want a YODA SODA!"
"Have you ever tried to shoot a pop-tart out your nose?"-Spacegirl
".... Stupid babies" RVB -tucker
"LOVE ME damn it!" -Twilightwolf
:iconiloveyouinvisibleink:
it's more important that it sounds better in your head than in real life.

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