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Undying love and loyalty by ~Xio101:iconXio101:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


I ignorantly believe that I can

Will things to be
Insanity sets in as I watch
Love gained an
Love lost instantly

Angry at you and
Lost in memories no one knew
Wondering and searching for
Answers that never come
Yelling at the sun
Still rising without you

Lost and lonely
Only one in a set of two
Violent thoughts and fearful cries
Endless shadows behind those eyes

Undying love and loyalty

--
I look at the words in my mind
And see the truth behind
©2009 ~Xio101
:iconxio101:

Author's Comments

Ok this is a fairly old idea I had for a pome, finely got around to makeing it. I think if I spent a little more time with it I could make it a lot better but... meh. :shrug:
I'm not thrilled with it but I still think its ok so.. yeah.

Anyway the idea is true love lost. One of them dies and these are the thoughts of the one who remains.
All bad things and angry thoughts but if you look at the first letter of every line its spells out I Will Always Love You. So.. I thought it was cool idea XP

Anywho enjoy! Comments are always welcome. :)

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~Nagi-Tsukiono Jan 11, 2009, 4:13:17 PM
THIS WAS CRAP! HOW DARE YOU SHARE THIS WITH ANYONE!

Okay, actually I liked it ^_^ It was good. I can see the emotion behind it and in the words.

Now...WRITE ME FIC!

--
~Nagi~
:iconxio101:
~Xio101 Jan 12, 2009, 9:04:47 PM
....... *cries* ....

XP
I'm glad you liked it... kinda. I didn't think it was great but still... worth sharing. XPP

Bah! I can't think of anything! I don't know where to start it! I was thinking of starting in the first episode but.. then I was like do I go along with the other episodes or just make my own way from there? Do I do stories with the whole crew or just work on Kaylee and Jayne? .....
Then my brain hurt so I went and did this XP

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"*SIGH* Stupid boobs" ~Nagi-Tsukiono
"AND REMEMBER! Man love is the best love!"
"I want a YODA SODA!"
"Have you ever tried to shoot a pop-tart out your nose?"-Spacegirl
".... Stupid babies" RVB -tucker
"LOVE ME damn it!" -Twilightwolf
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~Nagi-Tsukiono Jan 13, 2009, 9:29:49 AM
Lol, you're a face. It's a fic! It doesn't have to follow anything. Say you start it at the first ep, then decide you like where its' going, screw following the rest of the eps. Or just start wherever! Mine starts at a completely random spot. Simon is fixing up Mal, yet again, and it goes from there. On it's own little thing <3

I'm hungry T_T and I don't feel like working out today *pokes fat tummy* but I need to!

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~Nagi~
:iconxio101:
~Xio101 Jan 15, 2009, 1:36:46 PM
ok ok! I will totaly get around to... someday... maybe... *lazy face*
ok! I WILL DO IT! Soon! You'll have it by the next time we meet up!
(...Next sunday?)

Bah your not fat! ... man I worked out for a while... then I stoped... and gained five pounds.... *sad face*

--
"*SIGH* Stupid boobs" ~Nagi-Tsukiono
"AND REMEMBER! Man love is the best love!"
"I want a YODA SODA!"
"Have you ever tried to shoot a pop-tart out your nose?"-Spacegirl
".... Stupid babies" RVB -tucker
"LOVE ME damn it!" -Twilightwolf
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